***It's my second comment regarding your attendance in Edublogs Student Challenge. But unfortunately I have not received any response yet.***
You are welcome to Edublogs Student Challenge :) My name is Astaneh and as a mentor I will be with you and your cool blog during next 10 weeks. It's GREAT to be creative and for sure it would happen about everything in our life. It's my pleasure to have the opportunity to help to increase the quality of your blog. I work on media as educational broadcasting and also training officer. I think we can make this blog as a shining star by using your creative ideas. As the first step, I think it would be necessary to visit some other blogs joined the challenge in order to find our blog present position. After visiting some blogs with the same article and age, tell me your creative ideas about necessary useful and new tools and design on your blog. What do you think?
You can contact me via E-mail or leaving reply to this comment.
Thanks your attention and eagerness to develop your network and blogging skills. Actually it's you who is *this blog* admin and owner and your thoughts and minds will be shared in *this blog*. So the final decision about which changes are better to happen in *this blog* is yours :)
As the first step, it would be nice if here we have a *about me* and *about blog* in this blog. By these pages, the visitors from around the world who will search the search engines (for example Google) by the words for example(your details or age or interests or graduating or skills or ...) will find this blog easily. In the page *About this blog* you could write about your topics, writings, subjects, ideas and what will be shared by this blog. Then the first aim (connecting to all over the world) will be happened.
In theses addresses ( http://marahz3.edublogs.org/all-about-mara/ ) and ( http://coltonhz3.edublogs.org/me-myself-and-i/ )you could find the samples. If you put some questions in those pages to know more about the visitors, you can know them as well.
If you are agree with this opinion, try to do the changes and then we will continue :) If you need more help to make these pages, please connect me by E-mail tec.ttc@gmail.com
We are on the right steps to successfully in blogging skills.
For now, we could try to make some changes in our blog appearance.
Look at this model that I have made for my group. http://daddy-son.blogspot.com
There you could find useful Gadget necessary for a blog and how we should manage them.
you can find more Gadget if you like in Design section in your blog. But a busy and crowd blog makes the visitors tired.
After making the above changes, please write a new post about your country, your city and the interesting areas that you like to introduce to foreigners and tourists.
I know you will do that GREAT because you would like to be a Star in bloggers :)
Your interest on challenge and your activity made me happy and I hope your blog could be the top one in challenge.
We are in third week of challenge and I hope you have visited the sample page www.daddy-son.blogspot.com to have a model to make some changes in your blog appearance.
After that we could write a new post by the title '' about my country'' or City. in that post please write about your interest areas in your country or city that every visitors should know about them.
Please consider this point that if your blog be up to dated with new posts regularly, the visitors will visit here regularly.
G'Day Monie,
ReplyDelete***It's my second comment regarding your attendance in Edublogs Student Challenge. But unfortunately I have not received any response yet.***
You are welcome to Edublogs Student Challenge :)
My name is Astaneh and as a mentor I will be with you and your cool blog during next 10 weeks.
It's GREAT to be creative and for sure it would happen about everything in our life.
It's my pleasure to have the opportunity to help to increase the quality of your blog.
I work on media as educational broadcasting and also training officer. I think we can make this blog as a shining star by using your creative ideas.
As the first step, I think it would be necessary to visit some other blogs joined the challenge in order to find our blog present position. After visiting some blogs with the same article and age, tell me your creative ideas about necessary useful and new tools and design on your blog.
What do you think?
You can contact me via E-mail or leaving reply to this comment.
Mr. Astaneh - Challenge Mentor
tec.ttc@gmail.com
thank you and i will start to go to other people blogs and read some things that they have because it might be something that i can write about!
DeleteDear Monie,
ReplyDeleteThanks your attention and eagerness to develop your network and blogging skills.
Actually it's you who is *this blog* admin and owner and your thoughts and minds will be shared in *this blog*. So the final decision about which changes are better to happen in *this blog* is yours :)
As the first step, it would be nice if here we have a *about me* and *about blog* in this blog.
By these pages, the visitors from around the world who will search the search engines (for example Google) by the words for example(your details or age or interests or graduating or skills or ...) will find this blog easily. In the page *About this blog* you could write about your topics, writings, subjects, ideas and what will be shared by this blog. Then the first aim (connecting to all over the world) will be happened.
In theses addresses ( http://marahz3.edublogs.org/all-about-mara/ ) and ( http://coltonhz3.edublogs.org/me-myself-and-i/ )you could find the samples.
If you put some questions in those pages to know more about the visitors, you can know them as well.
If you are agree with this opinion, try to do the changes and then we will continue :)
If you need more help to make these pages, please connect me by E-mail tec.ttc@gmail.com
take good care
Astaneh - Student Challenge Mentor
thank you so much and i will!
DeleteG'Day Monie,
ReplyDeleteBravo! Well Done :)
We are on the right steps to successfully in blogging skills.
For now, we could try to make some changes in our blog appearance.
Look at this model that I have made for my group.
http://daddy-son.blogspot.com
There you could find useful Gadget necessary for a blog and how we should manage them.
you can find more Gadget if you like in Design section in your blog. But a busy and crowd blog makes the visitors tired.
After making the above changes, please write a new post about your country, your city and the interesting areas that you like to introduce to foreigners and tourists.
I know you will do that GREAT because you would like to be a Star in bloggers :)
Good luck
Astaneh - Edublogs student challenge - Mentor
Tec.ttc@gmail.com
G'Day Monie
ReplyDeleteYour interest on challenge and your activity made me happy and I hope your blog could be the top one in challenge.
We are in third week of challenge and I hope you have visited the sample page www.daddy-son.blogspot.com to have a model to make some changes in your blog appearance.
After that we could write a new post by the title '' about my country'' or City. in that post please write about your interest areas in your country or city that every visitors should know about them.
Please consider this point that if your blog be up to dated with new posts regularly, the visitors will visit here regularly.
Take good care
Astaneh - Student challenge mentor