Tuesday, September 20, 2011

perfect world

My perfect word well when i thinkk of that i think of it being like no realy cold day i only wont it to be hot most of the time but also i would wont some snow to and we would be able to weair anything we wont to and any kind of shoes like i ready dont no why we have to weair this and they saying so we wont have to spend that much money but when we out of school we weair any thing so that is more money and then we have to by more because we have different ones each year and i just dont think that it is right that they makeing us weair this and then when it be cold most poeple dont have jackets with out a hood on it so they should just let us weair them because it is realy cold in this school and i would wont the middle school to start later because we ahve to wake up to later and we should start at like 8 because at 7 that is to early.

One thing i would do if this was a perfrct wordl i would not wont no one to be poor beuase i just dont think that is right and how are we going to have poor people but we have so many rich people i thinkk they should help out or they should stop getting all that money and let some poor people have a job and give then a change and maby have like 50 housees so that poor poelple can live in then lik 4 people to one house and give then a jobe and let then try to get back on there feet so when they can they can move out that house and get there own house but its like that because no one wont to help then out that is why they steal at the same place they been in because they are not getting any help and they cant do it by themself they need somewere to start at and then after while they will have there own house and ever thing but if we dont help then they are not going to get any were in life and that realy need to change because i realy dont think that is right at all.

And i realy wont life for some of all the volence and stuf to stop but i dont think it will never stop but i think we can help for it not to haooen so much because it is realy to many people this is dieing and most of the time they dont do any thing they just be at the wrong place awt the wrong time and then next thing we no is there life gone and i think for the poeple who kil then should go to jall for life because they took someone life so there for they should not be about to go to jall for a little bit of time and get otu then should be in there until they die if you take someone life then you should not be able to live your life i just wich that it wont be so much because it is realy gettignbad because people just dieing and i just wish that we could dp something to not make it happen so much

well that is my perfect world and i wish that it will come true one day well im done so hope you like it and say something nie about it

Lovve jahmonie

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